Really good idea, I like the writing. My one suggestion / comment is that it sounded as either your singer was afraid to get loud or you were recording somewhere where being loud wasn't possible. Definitely needed more power in the throat, let it out! wooo
I love Dad
Dad exceeds all the expectations of my real Dad. I really love the Dad movies, I love Dad's limitless powers and the fact he uses them for random crap. (Thats how I imagine it)
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